04-27-2008
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أديب المنتدى
تاريخ الانضمام: Jun 2006
محل السكن: العراق الجريح
المشاركات: 11,828
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اقتباس:
أرسل أصلا بواسطة دمــ ع ــة قــ م ــر
mmmmmmmmmm
I'm not quite sure I get this right
However, I'll try
The breeze followed free
I ran and it raced me
?Is this how Dr. Jassim
I'll catch up with everyone later
c u's
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ودي و وردي
دمــ ع ــة قــ م ــر
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Really not Damat Kamar
I have said that it is a bee
You should have started with a new line that
rhemes the last sound in the original line of poetry.
Good luck next time
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شكرا من القلب لمن أهداني هذين التوقيعين
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